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Friday, November 11, 2011

Six Sentences

My attempt at a six sentence story:

She was a vision to behold. I sat opposite her during a one hour train journey, and she kept smiling at me. Nervous, I thought, or a foreigner in a foreign land.

Eyes met often, smiles were exchanged, not a word was spoken and the hour passed pleasantly enough.
I gathered up my stuff and blurted out, "This is my stop", and she retorted, "Too bad!".

What did she mean?!

1 comment:

Theoden said...

Written in December 2010.

A fun train ride from NYC to CT it was :-)